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A paintball picture I made for a local paintball club.

I have to say I'm extremely happy with the result, spendt only 3 short evenings on it. and will look awesome where I want to use it.

I could use some critics on it. so please, be honest when commenting, include pro's and cons.

it's in 1920x1080 (HD) and downloadable, so feel free to use it as your wallpaper or anything.
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Okay, you asked for some critique, so I'm gonna do my best:

PROS: The realism of the mask looks amazing. The effect on the goggles looks great and I think the reflections and the spots of colour makes it really stand out. I also think you chose the perfect cropping for this, since it's following the golden ratio.

CONS: The first thing I noticed was that it was very dark. I think that you should perhaps make the background a little lighter so it's easier to see the person. I had to study it for some seconds before I realized what it was supposed to be (no offense, I was really impressed when I noticed what it was) If it's gonna be used in a paintball club for people to see it's important that they don't have to study to picture closely to see what it is.

Besides what I mentioned in the CON-section, I think it looks really good. Great job.